Death Poem by Bob and Alex Eichen

Death

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I'd appreciate the angel more
If she'd stolen the memory with the man.

I can just see-

No distant glares at our places;
The pallisades and tennis courts,
The road at 3 AM.

No blood drawn lip at pictures,
No pounding on the mirror.

A shadow space of air at every anger...
A look-away at every laugh...

In place of memory, a sunlit lake-
A time I stood in thought...
With no idea of what was lost forever.


(This poem was written by Alexander Eichen)

Monday, June 18, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: places,anger,memory,mirror
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cynthia Evans 24 February 2008

'I'd appreciate the angel more/if she'd stolen the memory with the man' Amazing lines. Wow.

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Ashley Ellis 12 July 2007

This poem has greatly deep thoughts that evaluate what you believe in, great work!

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Marc Mannheimer 18 June 2007

Wonderful. Evocative of loss (which isn't wonderful, of course): I'll have to read more of your works.

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