Death And Birthday! Poem by negar shahnouri

Death And Birthday!

Rating: 5.0


day after tomorrow is my birthday
but i wont celebrate it, no, noway

there will be no party, lets say sorry in advance
you left me in my BD, how lucky iam, what a chance,

do you need a party, ok fine
you, tears and gloom are invited, our appoinment will be at 9!

candles candles look how madly i do cry
so stop dancing infront of my tearfull eye

there is a knife beside the cake
, do you mean i have to commit suicide?
ok close your eyes, close, now open, i have died!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 October 2009

Your flair for the dark, and abstract is well demonstrated here...I have always been facinated by the likes of Poe, Dickinson, Teasdale, and Stephen King, and their darting penchant for the eerie & morose...Nice Work, Negar! F j R

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Reihaneh Jalalian 19 January 2009

Negar i really love the way u write your poems it was beautiful but the end was sth. well done 10

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