It's the time I observed
the dark skies shine,
the rain drops rumble,
the children celebrate,
the climate freeze,
It's the time when
my echoes of the heart begin to mumble
with the lullaby of the wind, and the cup of tea
redefining the meaning of heaven
Oh nature! give us more of these days
I will dedicate you more of these poems
The last two lines are my favourites of all. Perfect ending.honestly Very good.
I wonder if there could be a better way to express one's gratitude to nature or to a particular season. Oh nature! give us more of these days I will dedicate you more of these poems
Fine poem with creativity. Theme is nicely chosen, so are words in your poem. This poem has really touched me personally. Review my poems 2 encourage my unique Pari Style
An endearing poem with an understand or the beauty of and our relationship to nature. Well done.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Gowtham, such a heartwarming write...10+++
Thank you Bernard :)