Deep Deep River Poem by Joyce Hemsley

Deep Deep River

Rating: 2.8


Rictameter - first and last word
must match ~ syllable count
2.4.6.8.10 and reverse...

River
So deep and wide
Flow gently, for awhile
Take advice from the constant Nile
Where the Aswan Dam has magical style
You bring floods, the Nile never does
Seems a Dam is a must
Take a hint deep
River

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 02 December 2016

(Deep Deep River by Joyce Hemsley.) ** Love this style and will give it a try. Thank you.

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Joyce Hemsley

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Portsmouth England
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