Deep Water Poem by mystery writer

Deep Water

Rating: 5.0


i sink deep into a pool of water my eyes blink unnaturally
i jerk up no air
face hot
sounds unheard
just so unnatural
can't hear can't think
my heart pounding so loud
so rhythmically
thunk
thunk thunk
thunk
then stop
everything stops
the rotating earth
my heart
life itself
everything

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 20 April 2011

A well penned and poignant write! You got what it takes to make it in the poetry world, talent! Keep it up! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! ...

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Obinna Eruchie 15 October 2009

This is a fascinating piece, 'deep water'.

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~ Jon London ~ 09 July 2009

you are a very gifted writer....I love the imagery you have painted with select verse...well penned..............keep exploring

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