Deeper Than Deep. Poem by Fay Slimm

Deeper Than Deep.

Rating: 5.0


From bottomless depth,
Sunken old wreckage........
Of previous detatchment
Anchors our love.

Abiding above tide-lines
And drifting.................
Is ocean of life's mundane.

Seen from above...........
It suffocates,
But 'neath surfy breakers
Lie spacious caverns.............
Where love quietly hides.

Close relationships survive
Frothy dark squalls................
When day's boat sinks
Blissful dreams blow lively.

Night wind's sweet nectar
Feeds passion then,
Which sating love's need,
Nets close bonds.

So..........when we part
We carry, deeper than deep,
Love's secret hope...............
And wait for our future
With patient heart.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 20 July 2009

fay great write vivid words of love

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 August 2009

Fay, this is so beautifully written, so wonderful a picture it paints in the mind... Andy 10

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Shashendra Amalshan 27 July 2009

this is great, beautiful as always my darling Fay ma'am..... these lovely ones always can cleanse the sore hearts.... so beautiful to read.....10 wont be enough i guess to present you with writing such lovely ones... with lots of love shan

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excellent, beautiful, passionated poem

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 26 July 2009

Goshh, I can feel the depthness, the abyss of blissful heart, a fortress for great lovers.

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Lady Grace 25 July 2009

So..........when we part We carry, deeper than deep, Love's secret hope............... And wait for our future With patient heart....very nice lines...

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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