Delicate Poem by D.N. Rebb

Delicate

Rating: 5.0


How delicate
So small and seemingly fragile
Appearing so eloquent
Yet evolving from exile

Growing into an unrecognizable being
Approach with caution
Question all known feelings
Has love been forgotten?

You've drawn inward deeper
Do you not comprehend the warnings?
We are not converted believers
Yet, we are all conforming

Wishing for a warmer spring
Questioning the previous season's bring

Always hoping all will be fine
Why are you not covering all signs?

Prepare for change
There is no storm on this forecasted range

It is not welcome
Beg for everyone to help them

Yet, here I sit
Still craving for your smile
Will this relationship permit
To feel real for a while?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Teenagers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 19 March 2023

Beautifully inked. You have a nice style of writing to express your thoughts.

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Jim McGill 19 March 2023

I get the feeling that these are grand children. If so, impress upon them that the chair upon which you now sit, will one day be empty. So, if they have any questions, ask them now. History disappears when you leave

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