Tuesday, April 7, 2015

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A faded flower
I am
Still clinging to
The branch.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Ramesh Rai 12 April 2015

A thought provoking and poignant write.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 11 April 2015

Once bud, now a faded flower about to fall and wither away. That is life. You have brought out the truth in very simple words.

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Valsa George 10 April 2015

We all look nostalgically back to life and yearn for what is lost! But be consoled.... all is not lost! Beauty and fragrance linger, though not so fresh as before!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2015

Faded flower still clinging to the branch. Really very beautifully presented each line with nice humour. Excellent.

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Tushar Ray 09 April 2015

Very nice outlook and poetic expressions of an accomplished life. I love the comparisons with flower buds, blossomed and decay - As I read I related to myself. Thanks for sharing!

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