Democracy— A Hapless Bride Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Democracy— A Hapless Bride

Rating: 5.0


Wedding scene— a hapless Hindu bride:
The groom side boasting of gain landslide,
Groom feeling fabulous,
Bride side: they cheated us,
A bride whilst still alive, all but died.
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Someone compared democracy like an Indian bride. This ditty elaborates how she might be feeling.
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Tongue-in-cheek | 10.05.15 |

Friday, April 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: democracy,wedding
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 23 April 2019

Not only is this a rousing limerick, its an insightful metaphor of our modern dilemma, democracy has become an hapless victim condemned to be overthrowing by showboating hucksters. As you neatly declare we are all cheated from this system, one that has corrupted by the mechanisms of rampant capitalism and demagoguery. Our choices in grooms become less savoury. A Big 10!

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 April 2019

Thank you indeed, Kevin Patrick, for your well-articulated feedback. I feel systems perse are fine, the question is, how they are handled. Even communism makes some good points. Capitalism too is abused. And so is democracy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 April 2019

A very amusing Limerick dear sir....Enjoyed the fun.......................................................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 April 2019

You are welcome Dr Swain for rating it so highly.

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