Claire Page

Depression - Poem by Claire Page


Depression depression,
Gets to us all,
We don't know why?
But it's always there,
At some point in our lives,
All we want is for our depression to go away,
The types we have are all different,
But we all wish that the depression would fly away just like angels would!

Comments about Depression by Claire Page

  • (1/15/2016 7:18:00 PM)

    untreated will snowball
    to something scary
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  • Rajnish Manga (1/15/2016 5:53:00 AM)

    You have rightly pointed out that depression does affect everybody at one time or the other and 'we all wish that the depression would fly away just like angels would! ' Thanks for sharing, Claire. (Report) Reply

  • (1/15/2016 5:01:00 AM)

    A serious problem every one faces some time in life identified in verse form. Thanks.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/15/2016 2:46:00 AM)

    Stress! ! With the pressures of life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Darlan M Cunha (1/15/2016 2:29:00 AM)

    Day after day, night and day
    men and women fight all the time [...] - from the poem Rage Depression Amnesia.

    Congratulations on being poet of the day.
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  • Jasbir Chatterjee (1/15/2016 1:11:00 AM)

    Depression is natural and we all hope it goes away soon; but hoping is one thing and breaking out of it is quite another...Congrats on being poet of the day! (Report) Reply

  • (9/16/2006 10:32:00 PM)

    hm... im not really sure about seemed that you way over abused the comma, makeing the flow suffer. and there seems to be a lack of word choice. a thesaurus helps. keep writing! with all things, it takes practice! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, July 15, 2005

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 17, 2006

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