Depression Poem by Claire Page
Depression
Depression
Depression depression,
Gets to us all,
We don't know why?
But it's always there,
At some point in our lives,
All we want is for our depression to go away,
The types we have are all different,
But we all wish that the depression would fly away just like angels would!
Depression is natural and we all hope it goes away soon; but hoping is one thing and breaking out of it is quite another...Congrats on being poet of the day!
You have rightly pointed out that depression does affect everybody at one time or the other and 'we all wish that the depression would fly away just like angels would! ' Thanks for sharing, Claire.
A serious problem every one faces some time in life identified in verse form. Thanks.10 points.
Day after day, night and day men and women fight all the time [...] - from the poem Rage Depression Amnesia. Congratulations on being poet of the day.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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hm... im not really sure about this...it seemed that you way over abused the comma, makeing the flow suffer. and there seems to be a lack of word choice. a thesaurus helps. keep writing! with all things, it takes practice!