Destiny... (The Move Ahead) Poem by Bilal Khaki

Destiny... (The Move Ahead)

Rating: 4.8


Lowing to self I ask slow,
O my master! Where to go?

Said the self left in me,
“To wandering paths in woods and meads
lying ahead in world of treads.”

“To the path which lead you to
the valley of thy destined goal.
Not the path which left you in
the valley of horrible den.”
Thus answered the other power.
and left me in a confused mark.

I felt done when a voice within
told me a certain thing.
“Never to worry what path grace
All paths go….. To same place.”

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 22 November 2009

and left me in a confused mark nice rational poem....

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Romeo Della Valle 22 November 2009

Well-penned poem, I agree with Marieta, nice rational poem, thanks for sharing, keep it up, you got my vote,10+++

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Zubyre Parvez 07 March 2011

A noble theme and interestingly written.

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Ashniki 87 10 December 2009

sir ur theme is very good. i like ur poem n thanks 4 written.plz write more poems.

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Ashwin Satyal 25 November 2009

nice peom, i really liked the theme

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Rajaram Ramachandran 24 November 2009

Yes you are right. All paths lead to the same goal. A good finish.

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Eyan Desir 24 November 2009

A good piece to ponder on

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