Detonate Poem by Madison Riley

Detonate

Rating: 5.0


We're communicating through dirty eyes
Sodden lips and sterile thighs
You're relic and pyre
I'm sullen and cloyed
Composed in the logic of all I've destroyed

Winding down through restless words
Silent actors; vagueness preferred
I'm waiting to watch the blue sky shatter
Stain our bodies in rich grey matter

I want to watch you self-mutilate
I want to watch you detonate
Activate all you sedate
I want to watch you desecrate

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jennifer Hartman 18 November 2007

Very nice. I like this poem a lot!

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L M 13 November 2007

Beautiful. You have anger insider just waiting to be unbridled.

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Thomas Brant 11 November 2007

so deep, dark. A poetic abyss of pain and anger. I love you.

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