Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 246,264 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Develop Delight - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Decoration dazzles Dolly’s dad
Day Dream dazes daylight dead.
Dearth, death debilitate decider,
Ditty, diva, divine draw divider.

Debate, debt debauch decency,
Definite demands delimit deficiency.
Delve deliverance develop delight,
Demystify divine, deity, day light.

Devilment devastates devoted devotees,
Devout devotees devour deities.
Don’t diddle don’t disavow,
Don’t drool, dudgeon disallow.

Topic(s) of this poem: advise, spirituality

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Poet hopes for delight by removing evils. Well decoration with shining light dazzles the eyes and mind of a person. Here the person is Dolly’s father. Scarcity or wants and death make the mind weak of decider. Simple song, great women singers or clergyman draw the screen of dividing. Debate and debt corrupt the correct behaviour. Definite demands of people for particular commodities increase or decrease deficiency as per positive or negative demand. You delve or search deliverance. You demystify or clarify what are divine, deity or God and day light. Devilment or wild spirit devastates the mind of devoted devotees. At the end poet requests all his brothers and sisters, “Don’t cheat anybody. Don’t disavow responsibility. Do not be greedy. Don’t dribble. Disallow the dudgeon or anger. If you give attention to these, you may be delightful. This is the theme of the poem in nutshell. It is written in Sambalpur, Odisha, India and is dedicated to the people of the world.
Debouch – corrupt morally
Demystify – clarify, explain rationally
Devout – pious, Dudgeon – resentment/ indignation

Comments about Develop Delight by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/11/2016 7:32:00 PM)

    Feedback received
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    xI love the thought of developing delight dear poet friend - - thank you too for sharing the meanings of thoughtful word-usage.
    31 Aug 2015 by Fay Slimm | Reply

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    xI enjoyed your poem very much!
    31 Aug 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply

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    xi love the rhyming. thanks for sharing!
    31 Aug 2015 by Kantanka Addo- Osafo | Reply

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    xPleasing, Sir.
    31 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply

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    xWow a rhyming alliteration, great write
    31 Aug 2015 by Rebecca Joy | Reply

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    xFantastic write and it is amazing that you could write with all of those letter Ds!
    31 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply

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    xThe alliteration is awesome! Fun write!
    31 Aug 2015 by Gary Lee | Reply

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    xLovely creativity, wonderful read, thank you for sharing!
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    xSo interesting and fun! ! ! Tfs xoxoxo blessings dear
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  • Valsa George (9/4/2015 12:59:00 AM)

    Devilment devastates devoted devotees,
    Devout devotees devour deities.

    The alliterative resonance keeps the poem stand apart! Enjoyed it like a tongue twister!
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/2/2015 11:33:00 AM)

    Great work! with the letter D starting all words. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (9/1/2015 5:54:00 PM)

    Your words are dazzling with D.....elight. Clever your are (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/1/2015 9:03:00 AM)

    A great art of alliteration and a message to mankind (Report) Reply

  • Sanjukta Nag (9/1/2015 6:51:00 AM)

    it's a remarkable work. I've never seen the use of alliteration in such a height. amazing and extra ordinary. salute to your vocabulary. (Report) Reply

  • Alesia Leach (8/31/2015 6:17:00 PM)

    There was tongue twisting, rhyme and flow. I loved it! ! Beautifully done! ! (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/31/2015 9:52:00 AM)

    Kumarmani Mahakul is master of alliteration, see his art in this poem.............................10, (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (8/31/2015 1:43:00 AM)

    Outstanding poem............all words starting with D...indeed a magical work.......10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015

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