indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Dialogue With Self - Poem by indira babbellapati

'my insider is tired...'
there's no 'mmm...'
or an 'ahh...'
in response

'this silence has
a thousand needles'
there's no 'is it so? '
'does it pain?
in response

05dec2009
14.30hrs


Comments about Dialogue With Self by indira babbellapati

  • (12/6/2009 12:10:00 AM)


    Never mind.. give that insider some time to recover. The poets at poemhunter will take care of the 'mmm', 'aah', 'is it so' and 'does it pain' responses in the meantime. Take care.

    Love,
    Ranjit.
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  • (12/5/2009 8:09:00 PM)


    I think this is a very important dialogue and nessesary for ones good health, like all good things in moderation.-10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 10:37:00 AM)


    yes...
    the self, split into two...
    sincere expressions.
    thank you ma'am.
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  • (12/5/2009 3:16:00 AM)


    nay pain thy sould in wane............... (Report) Reply

  • (12/5/2009 3:09:00 AM)


    fine poem
    a dialogue with self
    a bit painful...
    regards
    sandhya
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, December 21, 2009


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