'my insider is tired...'
there's no 'mmm...'
or an 'ahh...'
in response
'this silence has
a thousand needles'
there's no 'is it so? '
'does it pain?
in response
05dec2009
14.30hrs
I think this is a very important dialogue and nessesary for ones good health, like all good things in moderation.-10
yes... the self, split into two... sincere expressions. thank you ma'am.
fine poem a dialogue with self a bit painful... regards sandhya
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Never mind.. give that insider some time to recover. The poets at poemhunter will take care of the 'mmm', 'aah', 'is it so' and 'does it pain' responses in the meantime. Take care. Love, Ranjit.