indira babbellapati

Rookie - 106 Points (visakhapatnam, india)

Dialogue With Self: Ii - Poem by indira babbellapati

'hey, where were you? '

'well, i was pulled
into one of those
snatches of oblivion, again! '

'who's with you? '


'what's there...? '

'nothing! '

'keep this in mind...'

the voice faded...


Comments about Dialogue With Self: Ii by indira babbellapati

  • (12/15/2009 7:45:00 AM)

    yes....dialogue with self.....
    all the best!
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  • (12/13/2009 5:08:00 PM)

    i hope you don't mind my eaves-dropping but I'm liking what I hear....great dialogue! (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2009 5:21:00 AM)

    I too have a nice inner companion to keep myself engaged. Keep going on and on and on. (Report) Reply

  • (12/7/2009 1:33:00 AM)

    dear respected Indira, the voice was there, see again. Never fade away. Presented well. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 7, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, December 24, 2009

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