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Diaries Of A Mermaid

Rating: 5.0

Everyday, i roam around the reef & think
Think of the lighted arrows which warms me
I hear above voices of people laughing & crying, so i take a wink
Then i became curious 2 know the world outside the sea
I thought that their world is beautiful & pink
So, i felt jealous, unsatisfied & not free

Sometimes, when the shore is empty & calm
I get closer 2 enjoy the balm
I find a little girl throwing 2 the sea a simple wish
Hoping that it would be caught by some fish

I have too many questions in my soul
I wonder if people r living by a rule?
R they happy & enjoying this world?
Or they r sad & feeling bored?

But i'm mad from their deeds
Why do they kill my friends & prohibit me from my needs
We r weak but beautiful creatures
They know that the beauty of the sea is reflected on their features

We love the beauty
& that's why the lord created us here
&serving man is our duty
we never worry about the next hour, day or year

but at the end of the day
i walk with my friends & we play
i thank GOD 2 be in this small world
among my friends & family which r my sword
& i return back & with the waves i sway

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fawzia Zie 16 August 2009

yeah! me too wonder ' if people r living by a rule? ' thnks for yr message...

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Kuji Soliman 09 August 2009

i loved it, you really have talent -Masha2allah- you have to keep on writting so i could keep enjoying!

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Anthony Edmond John 06 August 2009

I love the rhythmic flow.. This poem is sweet and illustrative.. Good Job sweetheart. The Sage Anthony Edmond John

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Doha Ewiess 04 August 2009

this is really really really FANTASTIC zeinab....i didnt imagine i will enjoy it that much :) your poem is really great....keep it up girl ;)

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Indira Babbellapati 04 August 2009

wonderful and ralaxing diary entry of a little mermaid... :)

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Nooruddeen Mm 12 October 2009

Good imagination, wonderful Rgds Nooruddeen

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Obinna Eruchie 31 August 2009

This is good, and very imaginative. The mermaid questions why man should be killing her friends (the sea animals) and other things. After all the lines 'We love the beauty/ & that's why the lord created us here/ &serving man is our duty/ we never worry about the next hour, day or year...' show how ironic that man being the most important of all God's creation turn out to be the creatures who worry too much.

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 19 August 2009

very wondeful and fantastic

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Sameera Sameer 17 August 2009

love it 10+++++++++++++

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 16 August 2009

I have too many questions in my soul I wonder if people r living by a rule? R they happy & enjoying this world? Or they r sad & feeling bored? .............. beautiful reflections..thanks for sharing.....keep up the good work..........

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