Diary Of A Young Bird (1) Poem by kite remedy

Diary Of A Young Bird (1)

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a feeling to trust,
fly to whatever skies lie forward.
young, helpless, blunt,
that's how my wings flap..

dreams, some are broken,
some are too beautiful,
so I left them behind.
unspoken,
'I need no rules.'
'I need to fly...', screamed I.

having hurt by the blowing wind,
having discarded the unsuitable dream,
the overcrowded sky I drift away in..

I know I might haven't accomplished anything yet,
no matter how I hurry.
However,
I still want to fly so bad,
that it resonates out of me..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aijaz Asif 23 November 2008

yes some times our heart also feels like tiny scared and hurt bird, who wants to fly...fly-(light hearted, loved with happy feelings) , but winds of loneliness and sorrows do not let it fly...i might got the wrog idea of this poem, anyway its a very beautiful piece and i luvd it, thanks for sharing 10++ rgds asif

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 November 2008

A beautiful poem indeed. Keep it up dear poet!

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