! ! When A Lover Dies! ! Poem by kite remedy

! ! When A Lover Dies! !

Rating: 3.1


Hello, Honey
how have you been?
I know I can't be near,
would you just forgive me?
I know I've gone,
for a time quite long.
It's something we can't defy,
something out of our mind.
How's our children?
I hope they are fine.
I hope they go to school,
score their mark 10 full.
Sara'd be 10 this month,
she must have been prettier now.
Andy'd be in elementary,
I really couldn't wait to see.
Have you stopped crying lately?
It's breaking my heart to see,
how you cry
and sob every night
while supressing your tears with all your might
should you read this
you'd know I'll always love you
a letter I just finished
with all my love for you
sooner you'd understand
what God has planned
I know you still try to deny
later you'd see
that when a lover dies,
his love doesn't die with him
and should you read this letter I'd be glad, I'd be better
to let you know I love you still
and I'll always will..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bonnie Collins 29 January 2009

Very nicely composed..... This is very touching and I am quite sure, it is somewhat of a consolation to write this for you... Very emotional and sad write.. Bonnie

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Little Morning Star 30 January 2009

since the first line, I know that I will cry in the end..

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sumaira .....ir 30 January 2009

Beautifully express your love well write... Enjoyed reading it

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Lynda Robson 30 January 2009

A lovely poem, it touched me, thank you, 10 Lynda xx

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Vaibhav Pandey 30 January 2009

very good kite..... i liked it a lot

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

his love doesn't die with him Rachel Ann Butler

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C. P. Sharma 07 February 2009

Undying love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 February 2009

True love never dies. As Eddie said, it lives on......

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 February 2009

You paint a great picture of love!

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Eddie Roa 01 February 2009

We die but love lives on. A heartfelt expression of eternal love.

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