kite remedy

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! ! When A Lover Dies! ! - Poem by kite remedy

Hello, Honey
how have you been?
I know I can't be near,
would you just forgive me?
I know I've gone,
for a time quite long.
It's something we can't defy,
something out of our mind.
How's our children?
I hope they are fine.
I hope they go to school,
score their mark 10 full.
Sara'd be 10 this month,
she must have been prettier now.
Andy'd be in elementary,
I really couldn't wait to see.
Have you stopped crying lately?
It's breaking my heart to see,
how you cry
and sob every night
while supressing your tears with all your might
should you read this
you'd know I'll always love you
a letter I just finished
with all my love for you
sooner you'd understand
what God has planned
I know you still try to deny
later you'd see
that when a lover dies,
his love doesn't die with him
and should you read this letter I'd be glad, I'd be better
to let you know I love you still
and I'll always will..


Comments about ! ! When A Lover Dies! ! by kite remedy

  • (9/21/2009 4:45:00 PM)

    his love doesn't die with him

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • C. P. Sharma (2/7/2009 2:29:00 AM)

    Undying love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    CP
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (2/2/2009 11:05:00 AM)

    True love never dies. As Eddie said, it lives on...... (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (2/2/2009 12:57:00 AM)

    You paint a great picture of love! (Report)Reply

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  • (2/1/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    We die but love lives on. A heartfelt expression of eternal love. (Report)Reply

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  • premji premji (2/1/2009 5:50:00 AM)

    your kite flies up in the skies of love..... (Report)Reply

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  • (1/31/2009 1:20:00 AM)

    The theme of your poem (written from the grave) is universal - the love never dies. The love is in you. Your poem is gracefully written with a good feel for language and the rhythm of verse. Well worth the read. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report)Reply

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  • (1/31/2009 12:55:00 AM)

    Very emotional write...true love never dies, it lives beyond death...and most important thing is to confess that love to our dear ones when we are still in life...it is crucial to let them know how much we love them....so that they can carry on even when we are dead! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
    fantastic write this is....10....kudos!
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  • (1/30/2009 4:22:00 PM)

    This is a nice smoothe emotional read with a very good rhythm. It really enhances the story or letter as it goes. Clear and meaningful write.
    Well done.

    GW62
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  • (1/30/2009 3:10:00 PM)

    great emotions and message.10 (Report)Reply

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  • (1/30/2009 11:09:00 AM)

    very good kite.....
    i liked it a lot
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  • (1/30/2009 8:55:00 AM)

    A lovely poem, it touched me, thank you,
    10
    Lynda xx
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  • (1/30/2009 2:50:00 AM)

    Beautifully express your love well write... Enjoyed reading it (Report)Reply

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  • (1/30/2009 12:57:00 AM)

    since the first line, I know that I will cry in the end.. (Report)Reply

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  • (1/29/2009 10:37:00 PM)

    Very nicely composed..... This is very touching and I am quite sure, it is somewhat of a consolation to write this for you... Very emotional and sad write..

    Bonnie
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  • (1/29/2009 10:10:00 PM)

    Pretty nice lines with good expressions (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 29, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 29, 2009


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