kite remedy

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An Empty Frame - Poem by kite remedy

I sit before a frame
It's empty and it's not the same
Picture there is none
Better if there's one
Of memory I just have
past we all have left

I sit before a nightstand
With this lonely thing in my hand
I hope that you all can see
or are you the same as me?
Likewise this empty frame so empty
that best resembles you,
and me..


Comments about An Empty Frame by kite remedy

  • (1/31/2009 5:30:00 AM)

    A nice sad poem. It's simple and powerful, the empty frame concept is great! (Report)Reply

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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (12/25/2008 6:45:00 AM)

    We are the empty frame.....10/10. (Report)Reply

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  • (12/19/2008 5:43:00 AM)

    Poem has a lot to say about art (Report)Reply

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  • (12/12/2008 11:53:00 PM)

    Awesome poem.. The title fits it well too.. Great write


    ~Krista~
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  • (12/12/2008 11:45:00 AM)

    fantastic poem. Nice write and a very emotion and heartfelt notion (Report)Reply

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  • (12/12/2008 10:31:00 AM)

    I sat before that empty frame too.Once I spent a whole night looking at her picture.When that picture was removed it took away my heart as well.
    Good intelligent writing. Appreciated.
    Sid
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  • (12/12/2008 6:21:00 AM)

    A hollow frame
    An empty name
    in this usless game
    are we the same?
    Too melanocholic poem............................
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (12/12/2008 3:08:00 AM)

    Nice poetic eloquence! neat and clean.............10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (12/12/2008 2:41:00 AM)

    An empty heart..Your words flowing through..

    Bringing such deep emotion of sadness...

    It's beautiful..fine imagery...

    Great poem...
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  • (12/12/2008 1:48:00 AM)

    hmmmm....empty heart with an empty frame........well penned (Report)Reply

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  • (12/12/2008 12:41:00 AM)

    Yes; I am the same as you! (Report)Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (12/11/2008 11:58:00 PM)

    An empty frame could be everythin....of memory lane.Good job Kite! (Report)Reply

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  • (12/11/2008 11:43:00 PM)

    fill the emptiness with this beautiful poem...10/10 (Report)Reply

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  • (12/11/2008 10:44:00 PM)

    wow! ! ! ! ! ! lovely
    yes memories are made of this
    Hope you wont keep this empty for long
    thanks for sharing this empty frame of love
    ++10 regards anju
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 11, 2008



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