Luke Pere

Did You Smile?

I am asleep;
dreaming of elusive worlds.
I sensed emotions I deemed
were real.
I saw a memory that
Gave me warmth.
I awoke, except I was
still smiling.
As I laid there in wonder,
I broke into morning laughter.
t'was a vivid dawn to a simple happiness.

Poem Submitted: Friday, February 23, 2007
Poem Edited: Saturday, January 22, 2011

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  • Naida Nepascua SupnetNaida Nepascua Supnet (7/6/2011 8:35:00 AM)

    mornings like this is worth remembering,
    nice smile
    nice mood
    nice day ahead
    nice poem...

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  • Romeo Della ValleRomeo Della Valle (7/4/2011 10:17:00 PM)

    You made me smile also and notice with this well penned and poignant write that you got what it takes to make it through the poetry world: TALENT: 10+++ Keep inspiring the World, Love and Peace for always! ...

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  • Shelley L Baxter-stanley (4/23/2007 1:45:00 PM)

    Simple poem for a simple pleasure...Smiling and laughter works wonders all the time! Great dream scheme...and a pleasure to read.
    keep smiling Luke,
    ==Shelley==

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  • Luke PLuke P (2/23/2007 1:17:00 PM)

    Well as i awoke i noticed this smile on my face and i started laughing.Like i transitioned from dream to reality.
    :)

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  • David Taylor (2/23/2007 11:41:00 AM)

    And you give the reader a smile, did you really wake or are we still dreaming?

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