Soumya Dash

Rookie (19-02-1988 / Angul, Orissa, India)

Die Right Now, O Loser! - Poem by Soumya Dash

Doesn't matter how happy you are
Doesn't matter how high you fly
If you can't propose the woman you love
Die right now! O heartless one!
You dont deserve to live here, ever...

Life's not for you, O loser
you'll always be a second choice after all
still if you decide to live on
You'll rot in this space forever...

There's no point carrying on living
For useless creatures like you here
Still I know, you are too coward for that
you'll prefer to be a second choice after all...
all your life, just a second choice after all...

If you can't propose the woman you love
Die right now! O heartless one!
You dont deserve to live here, ever...


Comments about Die Right Now, O Loser! by Soumya Dash

  • Shania K. Younce (1/29/2014 11:02:00 PM)


    I hope you find happiness. Bien! (Report) Reply

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  • (2/7/2010 1:43:00 PM)


    you can't force love. you can't force marriage. just let it come to you. if you rush it you'll regret it. if you wait, you'll become happy (Report) Reply

  • Adam Reed (2/7/2010 1:36:00 PM)


    watch someone read this and kill themselves...... (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2010 1:21:00 PM)


    someone is a little angry. I get that. Just write it and dont go there. Prison not fun (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 7, 2010



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