Dieing Day Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

Dieing Day

Rating: 5.0


When the winds stop blowing

When the heart somersaults no more

The life ebbs away

With twilight dancing in blinking lights

The world as if departs to rest

The cars blink in series

Sparkling in rows through darkness

Distant the heights of structures

Show blocks of rectangular yellow

The windows to other people’s life

At this distance a train of light flashes by....

On the tracks, on its way connecting towns

People in motion

World in revolve

Umpteen pending proposals

Making speed the need of ebbing day!

Till wisp of night wind gentle blows away cares

And caresses the heart...to relax!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malini

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sebastine Humaemo 19 January 2009

beautiful write......while reading your lines visual play runs in ma mind.....te way yu captured dieing day in your lines simply awesome........sebastine 10++........

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malini kadir

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Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY
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