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Fishes

Rating: 2.6

Fishes serene
Comfortable.....swim
Free these creatures
Swimming wild?
NO! ...in the fish pond
food thrown is man's send
Water changed
Beautiful his surroundings made
Greens provided
Friends to play
Fish in pond
In heaven of its own?
Truth?
A captive for the rest of his life
Even the fish
Pays for his comforts
In kind....
yet how serene..........
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aldo Kraas 29 May 2010

Another very interesthing poem of yours.

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Elbert Matt Loubser 07 January 2009

Ah yes, hehe very good. Makes me think about people who do not think for themselves and are held captive by the will of others.

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James Mclain 08 December 2008

I have a fondness for fish myself any thing for fish...good peace

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