Diffusion Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Diffusion

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I come out into the garden
As dawn breaks over hills
Columns of smoke go high
From roof tops and mills

Smoke rises to the clouds
And slowly gets lost in them
Before it loses its identity
It moves around their hem

Life comes to meet its end
Body gets ready to free the soul
Like smoke vanishes in clouds
A soul gets its home in The Whole

Thursday, June 20, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: death,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 20 June 2019

This is so very cooling- First, it paints a perfect morning landscape with enchanting images. Then, there is analogy with the cycle of life and death. Thanks for such a fine and sweetly rhymed poem.

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Jennifer Birchall 20 June 2019

A thought provoking poem how life changes to death. Thank you.

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Ruta Mohapatra 20 June 2019

Nice imagery, life vanishing like smoke! So true! Thanks for sharing!

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