Just Living Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Just Living

Rating: 4.5


I live inside me
Trapped by my thoughts
Good or bad
I let myself suffer for
The tomorrow

I can't live today
I can't forget the past

My heart is heavy
I can't take its load
Someday somewhere I
Have to take rest
Expecting a new sun
To rise and make me wise

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 07 February 2022

A poignant poem yet there is hope for a better tomorrow. Well expressed and crafted.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 February 2022

Your comment is appreciated. Thanks a lot.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 07 February 2022

There is hope still, a beutifull we crated poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 February 2022

My heartfelt gratitude Sir. Thanks.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2022

There shall be always chances tomorrow,5 Stars full on TOP, Anil Sir.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 March 2022

Someday somewhere I Have to take rest.....this is the naked truth dear poet. Enjoy the present moment.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 February 2022

It is so difficult to forget the past. But surely, we can hope and pray for a new dawn. An intense write that deserves full stars....10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 February 2022

Heartiest Congratulations for the poem of the day, dear Anil ji. A truthful, emotional poem.

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Nabakishore Dash 24 February 2022

congratulations for being chosen as POD.

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Unnikrishnan E S 24 February 2022

A poem of self appraisal… profound. Nice poem

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