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Disjointed

My pencil does not fit the sharpener.
Although I can expose a little lead,
the tip is flat and wears out quickly.
A dull tip pencil can describe my head.

The faucet on my sink has started leaking.
The drip upon the porcelain has stained.
I’d fix it or I could request a plumber.
A plumber cannot remedy my pain.

The tires on my auto need adjustment.
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Gary Witt 20 December 2009

Art imitates Life imitates our Inanimate Objects. Some terrific metaphors here. Well done. Cheers, G

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that was deep meaningful poem ended beautifuly where under blanket you hide seeking some warmth created by mind..as i say rusty mind who abide..is it left, is it right, who belong to my side..or hot bread, my mind is dead.....feed the mind with hot bread..may be your poem and mine explain that needs for maintainace of the body and brain through a warm rain..enjoyed the reading..10+++++

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 June 2009

now that's a coolllllll poem indeed...enjoyed it very much... it got it all, action, drama..sort of an amusing read sir..thanks for this one 10+++++++ regards shan

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Ian Bowen 09 June 2009

John, an enjoyable piece of work.10/10 Ian

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Duh Huh 08 June 2009

This has good rhythm and flows well. Disjoined is a fitting title and the way my head feels today lol. Thank you for sharing of your talent with us :)

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Stephen Stirk 08 June 2009

Make do seems to be the order of the day. The third and fourth verses seem to relate to two problems I have at the moment. Still I'll probably just stick me head in the sand as usual. 'Necessity is the mother abstention' Not right but fits the bill. A really enjoyable piece John. I have seen some of your work on the forum. Best Regards Steve

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