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David And Goliath

A lithesome youth takes to the field.
A stouter heart no man could wield.
Alone he stands against a host.
In front, a single guard they post,
the all-time champion of utter war.
His name is etched in martial lore;
a mighty bear in battle gear,
a giant warrior for all to fear.

Ferociously, Goliath attacks.
David stands but still reacts.
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Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009
David and Goliath mmmm..... you v composed this well indeed... i liked your earlier poems too.. specially narrative ones.... you are very professional when it comes to writing.. with loves shan
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Smiley Hooker 04 July 2009
An amazing interpretation of an old tale. Beautifully done and very readable. I love it, thanks! : -)
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Stephen Stirk 24 June 2009
I like this one. I'm always a sucker for a good rhyming pattern. I see lots of banter on the forum about rhyme - v - prose. It aint a competition. This is an old tale beautifully reconstructed in modern language. Very enjoyable read Best Steve
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Zachary Clark 16 May 2009
I loved it almost as great as being told by the Bible itself.
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truly amazing..magnificent words and the meanings are truly biblical!
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LOVEFOOL Aka 22 April 2009
Nice concept with a good flow, vivid and captivating 10++
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Jim Hogg 21 April 2009
The conductor/music imagery considerably enhances this poetic telling and helps create a crescendo effect to match the climax... very devious..
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Kesav Easwaran 21 April 2009
we want more Davids in this terror Goliath ruling world...sweet recitation...i liked your story telling and poem presentation style, John...thanks...10
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Duh Huh 17 April 2009
A beautifully written modern tribute to an old bible story. Very eloquently expressed with rhyme, wit and obvious talent. Thank you for sharing :)
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