life disowns me and
I turn an orphan
left alone on earth
deluged in a downpour …..
I empathise with u dear Unnikrishnan, but your nice poems do not make u alone.
Thank You, Mr Das for the encouragement. Feels great. Obliged
Poet Menon, I truly empathize with you. Since retiring, I've been struggling with this issue. I've found meditation and exercise to be very helpful. But in all honesty, the therapeutic value of writing and reading poetry seems to be most effective for me. And your poetry has really helped a lot!
Thank You, Richard for being so considerate to me. I really feel great companionship. Yes! Writing and reading poetry does help me a lot in sailing through the hard days. Grateful that you could understand me and relate with the poem
Very true, we need to embark on self-actualization to overcome this issue. Thought provoking poem Full ******
I am immensely grateful to you, Dr Nehal for the enlightening comments on the poem. Loved it, dear poet
When one feels disowned, his universe is deluged and the earth under his feet gets washed away…… Tears make no sense… nor do the agonies of existence…
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I had posted rejoinders to Nabakishore Dash and Richard for their comments here, a few days back. Now they have all disappeared. Ph, oh! Ph….