Distance Poem by Paul Storm

Distance

Rating: 5.0


along the
midnight sky

i look for
our star

suddenly
i realize

each one
contains you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Coach Roth 13 March 2008

Very nice...simple but elegant...Coach

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Don Mcwilliams 13 March 2008

I know that woman, too. Elegantly expressed tribute to the ONE. Don

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Ravi A 24 April 2009

This is absolutely a theme! You have conveyed your heart.

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Paul Butters 15 April 2008

Talking about your 'lines'..... This certainly looks like one of em. Now where's my notebook? ..... Paul.

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Edward Wright Haile 05 April 2008

A fine example of a so-called Haiku but ignoring the arbitrary syllable count for the sake of an English poem. Very nice.

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Riquetta Elliott 25 March 2008

Very well thought out and a beautiful poem Paul.

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Jurietta Duraan 14 March 2008

Perfect example of how a thought becomes poetry.. beautiful. Yuri

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