Do I Please You? Poem by Sarah Sisson

Do I Please You?

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I feel empty
because I do not know if I please you.

I am lost
because I know not where you were

I am frozen
because you don't tell me what you wanted

I cant love
because you caused me pain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rachel Ellard 22 October 2009

the tense change is somewhat confusing.

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