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**responsible (Inspirational)

Rating: 2.9

Where do I get this treasured bliss?
I take the passion of life and I take the risks.
Life isn't for that fool to be me.
I can understand my happiness in a simple kiss.

Truly I hold a key to the world I live in.
My mind is a blessing and I chose to give in.
To a higher power that is mine.
I can live a human life.
I can be forgiven for sin.

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Ridge Cahill 12 January 2009

A simple premise so eloquently conveyed...an inspiration indeed.

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Keith Hendrickson 12 January 2009

i like this a lot. the style and flow all of it. great piece

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 January 2009

Responsibility is a great job Sarah and this poem is an undertaking of this difficult job in a sense.....A good piece of write. Best Regards Naseer

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Ron Flowers 04 January 2009

I like it, Sarah. I like the attitude it portrays, I like the way you wrote it. Warm regards Ron

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Ency Bearis 02 January 2009

wonderful...a nice upliftment verses..10

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Reshma Ramesh 07 February 2009

truly inspiring............ with loads of wisdom...........well penned

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 January 2009

Truly I hold a key to the world I live in. My mind is a blessing and I chose to give in..............oh, superb way of thinking while trudging all through the path life by the wisdom, well depicted piece by the rhythmof life, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

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Eddie Roa 15 January 2009

This is a good statement of a personal creed. Write on.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 15 January 2009

Be responsible, you'll find a better inspirational in later life.The fulfilment is the medal to win.

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Akram Awadat 15 January 2009

nice poem greate one thanks

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