Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 22,242 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Do It Now - Poem by Amitava Sur

You are riding a Time Train which never waits,
So, do something fruitful right at this moment,
Since this moment you'll get never again.

You will be remembered by your deeds only,
Not by anything else!
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Amitava(24.8.2015)

Topic(s) of this poem: time

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Do It Now by Amitava Sur

  • David Wood (9/2/2015 5:31:00 AM)


    Very wise words, you will be remembered by your deeds. (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/2/2015 8:35:00 AM)

    Thank you David for appreciating this penning

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  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (9/1/2015 7:54:00 AM)


    Truly, it's now or never (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/2/2015 8:34:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot

  • (9/1/2015 6:04:00 AM)


    You will be remembered by your deeds only
    Not by anything else.
    This realization is one of the greatest achievements one could attain in life span.
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    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/1/2015 7:33:00 AM)

    Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem

  • (9/1/2015 2:10:00 AM)


    So true, the time train never waits, just rushes you through life only! We have very little time to do the right things, so we must do things right away! Time will not pass this way again, so we must make the best of it to be remembered at all! Great poem Amitava! Love it! Thank your for sharing, RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/1/2015 7:33:00 AM)

    thank you RoseAnn for your valued comment

  • Daniel Brick (8/31/2015 10:34:00 PM)


    Whoosh! The moment is so fleeting and we won't get a second; ; ; ; ======='''''''''''' chance. The question becomes since I will be left behind, who will I be left with? I don't want to rush headlong into a place called home which is friendliness but real (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/1/2015 7:31:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot for your comment

  • Rajnish Manga (8/31/2015 9:27:00 PM)


    Wow! You have summed up the philosophy of Kalchakra and Karma so elegantly and with brevity 'Since this moment you'll get never again.' Thanks. (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/1/2015 7:31:00 AM)

    Thank you for appreciating the writing

  • Gajanan Mishra (8/31/2015 9:17:00 PM)


    riding the time, good writing.. (Report) Reply

    Amitava Sur Amitava Sur (9/1/2015 7:30:00 AM)

    Thanks for your appreciation

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015



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