Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 396,536 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Do Not Cry Oh Chicks - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Do not cry, do not cry oh chicks,
Oh my dear children, my sweet flowers,
You do not cry at all once again,
I am your mother robin bird,
Just I have returned back
Bringing a huge blueberry for you,
I should feed this to you soon,
Oh my dear garlands of gold and diamonds,
Oh my dear stars of my nest,
Do not shed tear out of your hunger,
Now you will be happy getting taste,
Such a pretty blueberry is ripened.

Opening your golden beaks you show mouth
I should feed you soon to churn hunger,
After eating this huge blueberry,
You will grow soon with golden wings,
Soon you will learn flying with me,
Then all of us will visit near forest
There is blueberry tree near river,
As many as blueberries we can,
We should go there and swing and eat.

Now you eat this fruit eagerly
Oh my children, my heart's beats,
I shouldsing a song soon for you,
I should fondle and dandle soon,
Then together we should sleep in nest,
In this dreamy green forest,
Our nest is swinging in a strong branch,
You do not fear at all, I am near you.

I am your mother telling my dear chicks,
You catch up and eat soon this fruit,
God has given us freedom to fly,
In free sky above our nest to next,
When you will learning flying by his grace,
We together should glorify his name,
Declaring our nest as a clean paradise,
We should live here very happily.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,29 March 2019. All rights reserved.

Topic(s) of this poem: bird loving, birds, mother and child , nature

Form: Free Verse

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Cover photo © Kumarmani Mahakul,22 March 2019. All rights reserved.

Comments about Do Not Cry Oh Chicks by Kumarmani Mahakul

  • Indira Renganathan (5/16/2019 10:02:00 AM)

    It is always the mother's sense of feeling and consoling words that assuage the kids hunger..no exception with the birds too...a beautiful nature poem...10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • (4/23/2019 8:29:00 AM)

    Children are like sweet flowers. Parents love their children. Mother bird with due affection takes care of her chicks and tells them not to cry as she is near them. Nest is clean paradise. A motivational poem is greatly penned. (Report)Reply

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (4/10/2019 1:46:00 AM)

    Do not cry O Chicks! A very sweet and tender poem of mother's love for her children. (Report)Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (4/7/2019 5:26:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem that creates a delightful picture. So pleasing and interesting. Again thumbs up for the graphic. (Report)Reply

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  • Susan Williams (4/6/2019 8:20:00 PM)

    What a wonderful poem on a nature level but also on a metaphor for human life as well- - We should live here very happily. (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul Reza (4/5/2019 4:04:00 AM)

    Do not cry oh chicks, Almighty Lord will help you to be fed, ..... thanks for sharing this wonderful poem (Report)Reply

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  • Mahtab Bangalee (4/4/2019 11:33:00 PM)

    I've come
    I've come
    O my dear
    this is world
    none is alone
    though born lone
    morn, noon, afternoon
    evening, night all are God's boon
    for here I've brought a life
    o' it's a livelihood
    God's providing food
    for you o dear
    from the mercy of God
    I've brought
    for you O dear.............../// great feelings

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  • (4/2/2019 2:41:00 AM)

    A nice description of a mother's love and concern for her children. Loved it. (Report)Reply

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  • HB Rita (4/1/2019 12:22:00 PM)

    A mother no matter she is a human or animal always protect her children and secure them with shelter, food and warm hug. Beautiful poem with a great message. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/30/2019 11:52:00 PM)

    The tender feelings and immense love of a mother with which she toils and makes every possible effort to feed her progeny and nurture it in best possible manner has been beautifully described in this wonderfully crafted life song. (Report)Reply

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  • Aniruddha Pathak (3/30/2019 11:00:00 PM)

    They say things retain an impress of vicissitude of things that happened around. And there are people that can decipher the details. I think you Kumarmani M are one of them you see a picture and a video of what happened emerges.
    Wonderful poem

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  • (3/30/2019 2:29:00 PM)

    Superb poem, If we all become like birds this world will become a better place to live, thoughtful poem 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/30/2019 6:57:00 AM)

    Oh my children! ! !
    Beauty and nature,
    Able to care for them.

    Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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  • Valsa George (3/30/2019 6:00:00 AM)

    I am taken to a happy paradise where there is bliss, safety, security and contentment. This is the scenario not only of a nest where a mother bird and her little chicks are cradled in love and contentment, but of a happy home too where parents and children live together being well cared and supported. A heartwarming write! (Report)Reply

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  • (3/30/2019 12:29:00 AM)

    This is a great poem dear sir. I salute for your observation to the world of birds. This poem reflects that there is deep bond between mother bird and her chicks. Thank you dear sir for sharing this. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/29/2019 4:56:00 PM)

    You are a good observer of bird's life. I often wonder about your keen perception Birds are very careful and responsible for their chicks. The picture drawn in this poem proves this entirely. Birds should fly in freedom as they get happiness from freedom. I liked this poem very much. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/29/2019 2:51:00 PM)

    Every mother bird nourishes her chick with due care like human beings do. This poem is very nice and heart warming. I love birds and their lifestyle. (Report)Reply

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  • (3/29/2019 1:48:00 PM)

    What a heart warming poem. How beautiful when life flows easily. Healthy children, plenty of food, a guiding and loving parent. But this is not always the case. I often wonder why. But there are no answers. A lovely poem that teaches us to appreciate all the good things in life. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 29, 2019

Poem Edited: Sunday, March 31, 2019

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