Sunday, November 1, 2015

Do Raaste Comments

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Ajnabi shehar mein do raaste hain sath sath
Ek tune chuna, ek maine chuna
Juda hue hum raaston ke sath sath.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Sanjukta Nag 02 November 2015

A great poem from a great poet... your ghazal is breathtaking as usual. loved it and loved it. reading again.

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Souren Mondal 01 November 2015

Sach me bohut hi aachi hai apki ye ghazal.. Hum jinse mohabaat karte hai wo hi humme tanha chod kar alag raste me chalne lagte hai... Sine me dard hota hai, par uss dard ka koi dawai nahi milti.. Bas dile me dard le kar zinda rehne ka natak karte hai.. Mu me hasi le kar zeher pite hai.. A wonderful poem :)

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M Asim Nehal 13 November 2015

Thanks much Dhanyavad.......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 November 2015

Travelling in two roads of life with wise sense is wonderful in description shared with new theme. Interesting poem shared...10

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