Do Something Poem by Susheela Alexiose

Do Something

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I curse the moment I was formed
Yet it's your hands that has fashioned me

I curse the moment I was born
Yet it's your breath that gave me life

I curse the moment I came back to life
Yet your plans are higher than mine

I look upto you my King
Do something marvelous in my life

Lest I die of this misery
And your holy name is put to shame

Sunday, October 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 28 October 2018

I curse the moment I came back to life Yet your plans are higher than mine...dear poetess. you asked God to do something marvelous. look God is doing it. you grow to be a great poetess. the thing is that you should realize it...... belive me when i tell you. so many cannot write as simple and as clear full of emotion like you........ you are called by called to be a marvelous poetess. it takes tiime, it takes years to become a known poetess.. do it. always write.. thanku. tony

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2018

I curse the moment I was born Yet it's your breath that gave me life I curse the moment I came back to life Yet your plans are higher than mine.......touching expression with nice theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thank you dear Susheela for sharing this lovely poem.10

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