Do not ask me
How much do I love you
I still do not know how deep is the sea
Do not ask me
How much do I love you
I still do not know how vast is the sky
Do not ask me
How much do I love you
I still do not know how large is the earth
Do not ask me
How much do I love you
I still do not know how big is a star
If you can count the stars one by one
If you can count the sand of the sea
My love for you outnumber all these
If my breath can make you whole again
I will lay down my life for you
My sweet boy Cyrus
Dear Susheela, a well penned lovely poem...............
If my breath can make you whole again I will lay down my life for you..........These two lines I identify as the epitome of this lovely poem! So sweet expression...beautifully penned...10
the depth of the sea, the vastness of the skies. the star, . i can make u whole again inmy breath.......... very fine love.. innocent in its core.. and very poetic dear Shusheela. tony
I love to read poems from your Golden Heart, this again is of such precious value,5 Stars full on Top. I have enjoyed very much reading these beautiful utterings from a mother's heart
Love of mother for his child cannot be expressed better than this, many a poems are written by son/daughter for mother this is the first poem I am reading which is by mother for his son with such deep love. Awesome poem.1000*************
I have read the comments of the learned readers and feel that it truly deserves the same and much more. The emotional quotient weighs more than anything else. Thanks for sharing the same. I would like to translate this poem into Hindi for which I look forward to your kind permission.
Loved reading this poem which creates images of vastness in whatever term you may think of. Emotions pour out of the words and overwhelm the reader. Thanks. Kindly permit me to translate this beautiful poem into Hindi.
A most wonderful gift of love from mother to son. Lucky those who are loved like this! The most precious gift, that exists. Beautifully felt and far reaching poem.