Do You Feel It? Comments

well, we don't need all that high..............our high is when seeing our children achieved their greatest achievement in life................and seeing them growing from there........................thats the adrenalin..........coke, angel dust, baby grass, white ice, upjohn, lily 40.............you named it...............

The chase and the catch? I'm enjoying these so far... Ez.

I see what Tara means, but I think that it should be broken up into (at least) two stanzas as the narrative is two different voices from ' Isn't the high'.

You build up that high with an increasingly speedy-paced piece for the reader. A well-penned and inviting piece. t x

thanks.. I really appreciate it..

oh yeah man......i've felt it. great one