Do You Really Love Me Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Do You Really Love Me

Rating: 4.0


WE are apart, the forest grows quiet between us.
She hushes herself, for midnight makes heavy her eyes.

The tangle of vines have no end, her hand's are empty,
Only tree's divide us, and on them the moonlight lies.

Oh are you asleep, or Iying awake, my animal, my lover?
Open your dreams to my love and your heart to my Words.

I send you my thoughts-the air between us is heavy,
My thoughts fly in through your window, a necklace
Of pearl's, moist, rests on your breast.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 29 July 2022

Maybe you should try wiping away those pearls of sweat from her breast? I'll volunteer to help you. I like this poem. 4 stars. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 29 July 2022

James, with her heavy eyes and the air between you heavy as well, who IS this mystery woman, your 'animal'? ? Could it be the missed-by-me Valsa George? ? !

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