Do you remember the day
You told him that you cared
When everything seemed so simple
Do you remember the day
When he told you that he cared
When he asked you to be his bride
Do you remember the day
You told him he was to be a dad
He shouted the bar that night
Do you remember the day
He came home in tears
No you wouldn't
You had already left.
Alison, a beautiful little piece very poignant, especially the last lines. Another great poem. Keep up the good work. David
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful piece - well contructed, a great subject and a brilliant conclusion. Clever as well as poignant. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxx