Do You Know Who I Am? Poem by Alison Smith
Do You Know Who I Am?
Do you know who I am?
I am the dream you have not fulfilled
I am the nightmare you cant face
I am the speech you cant complete
I am the wave that hasn't hit the sand
The storm that hasn't stopped brewing
The tide about to turn
I am your potential not yet found.
So see who I am
And your dream will become a reality
You will face and conquer that demon
The speech will be complete and given.
Then the wave will hit the sand
The storm will pound the land
The tide will turn to flow in and out....
For I am your potential let me free
Reminds me of Emily Dickenson's - I dwell in possibility... Great thoughts interwoven in this. Love...TO
This is very powerful writing Alison. Great imagery from top to bottom with an effective and engrossing flow of meaning from start to very fine finish. Excellent stuff. xx jim
you are in deed a very talented poet. This was a beautiful piece of heartfelt poetry if there ever was.
... and there was me thinking of you primarily as an unusually talented poet.... t x
Awesome subject matter...Eloquently delivered...Stunning close-out. Alison, you continue to impress as a solid, diversified poet on PH.Structurally, crisp, yet silk-smooth, and always innovative...You, young lady...DO ROCK! F J R
Alison, great write here. You helped set my potential free as you well know. I loved this. Thanks for sharing it. David
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/12/2024 4:38:53 AM # 1.0.0
Beautiful Alison, the imagery in this was so dramatic I could see it happening as I read! A great poem... HG: -) xx