Do You Remember? Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Do You Remember?

Rating: 5.0


Remember, your kisses
Embraced my neck
Like a string of beads?
Remember, you took away
My tears?
And, now, you smile…
O man! Ungrateful!
Take back
Those cracked
Agate beads
From the more thankless
And ungrateful lass…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roger Cornish 17 February 2008

Like this one Tsira... Powerful... Rogerx

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Andrew Blakemore 25 October 2008

I really like the simile of kisses as a string of beads around your neck. Lovely piece to keep on my list. Best wishes, Andrew

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

This is not a comment, a request to you poet. Kindly go to your inbox and give me an answer, coz I m waiting for long days. And delet it plz.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 August 2008

Like the voice from heart.

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K. V. Venkataramana 11 March 2008

You carry your readers to the inner recesses of your heart through your lovely poems! Keep sharing your thoughts. K V Venkataramana

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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 February 2008

as when remembered each bead of kisses ever each speckles of love seems to be grown on the petals eternity never yet lost even into the sands of time ............., beautiful poem, quite luscious,10+, thanks for sharing

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