Do Not Regret... Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Do Not Regret...

Rating: 5.0


Dream sparrow's....
There is an ordinary...

Dream sparrow's...
For you simple...

Dream sparrow's...
There is a bluish...

Dream sparrow's...
There, for mountains -

And to the seas...
Dream sparrow's..

A bird of passage...
But do not regret her... -

The sparrow has a dream
Of heavenly colour...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Nwagwu 31 October 2008

so simple, simple indeed; yet so powerful - do not regret her, for she's so true, the sparrow has a dream not a bird of passge, no. simple and powerful and beautiful, Tsira.

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Lynda Robson 31 October 2008

This is so lovely Tsira, the dream sparrow, well penned 10 Lynda xx

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 31 October 2008

colorful thought of sparrow in words,10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 November 2008

Wow...........excellent writesTsira! Its like a dream within a dream...........^_^

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Andrew Blakemore 10 November 2008

The ordinary and plain sparrow has dreams of colour, a great poem Tsira. Best wishes, Andrew

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Kevin Carney 04 January 2011

Tsira, as always so well written. The Drean Sparrow what a great idea. The true free spirit. It's a great write that I really enjoyed.

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Sandra Fowler 13 November 2008

Your beautiful dream sparrow...a metaphor for the creative spirit, perhaps...one must not regret the giving of one's self away in words. Exceptional, Tsira. Love, SandraX

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Tom Balch 12 November 2008

The sparrow, a daily dream come true.10/10 regards Tom

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 12 November 2008

This poem reflects a feeling about something shifty, uncontrollable, indefinite in a sky full set.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 12 November 2008

Amazing.....eloquent..........fine imagery.....10+

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