Does Dream Come True? Poem by Sreekala Sukumaran

Does Dream Come True?

Rating: 5.0


I can see the sparkling eyes,
This glitters while looking at me,
Wants to say so many things,
That he spoke through his silence.

Can see an innocent smile in him,
So sweet and true it is,
Comes gently from his heart,
Like the flow of a river.

Love to hear his deep and caring words,
Like sweet nectar it turns,
With his magical way of speaking,
That reached my ears.

Suddenly woke up from my sleep,
And felt all these happened,
As if I knew him for years and years,
Still waiting for an untold story….

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ravi Sathasivam 24 May 2010

'Love to hear his deep and caring words, Like sweet nectar it turns, With his magical way of speaking, That reached my ears....' Nice poem. Well penned Always enjoy to read your poem 10+

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 May 2010

As if I knew him for years and years, Still waiting for an untold story...................................... soul seems to sparkle by light of blue as when guides to latch on to love like sky as always dappled by whites of blue yet it is curved infinite in skin of eternity.............fantastic exposition of stance untold on the rune of dream yet not spelt, a write of unique genre,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 May 2010

As if I knew him for years and years, Still waiting for an untold story...................................... soul seems to sparkle by light of blue as when guides to latch on to love like sky as always dappled by whites of blue yet it is curved infinite in skin of eternity.............fantastic exposition of stance untold on the rune of dream yet not spelt, a write of unique genre,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Ravi Sathasivam 18 May 2010

Yes, dreams do come true... Beautiful poem with lovely words Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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Gaurav Silwal 18 May 2010

nice poem, ...poetess... It is a pleasure to read your works. regards gaurav

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And if you believe with all your heart....dreams do come true. Wonderful poem my friend; D

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Gita Ashok 09 June 2010

I meant - 'yearning' in the previous comment! ! !

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Gita Ashok 09 June 2010

So may positve emotions flow through this poem - love, yearning, faith, trust, anticipation. A brilliant write, indeed! Enjoyed reading it.

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Gita Ashok 09 June 2010

So may positve emotions flow through this poem - love, yearning, faith, trust, anticipation. A brilliant write, indeed!

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‘…That he spoke through his silence….’ Silence is brilliance resplendent…to come true and it comes if yearning is highest 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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