Chris Mackie

Don'T Leave Me Here - Poem by Chris Mackie

Darkness shrouds my house
It has no windows or doors
There is no way back in
Everything is gone
I sit here cliff side
Unable to turn back
Afraid of what lies ahead
Looking down at unknown light
I call out, 'Don't Leave Me Here! '

Copyright Chris Mackie 18/06/2008

Comments about Don'T Leave Me Here by Chris Mackie

  • (11/10/2008 1:50:00 AM)

    Quite touching! ! ! vibrantl emulation of pain in the murmur.
    I love that utterance, I remember, Hugh Maurns too.
    keep writing..............rgrds/salu
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  • (10/4/2008 1:54:00 PM)

    Very dark and moving. . (Report) Reply

  • (6/18/2008 6:22:00 PM)

    Inspirational...... hee hee.... aroha
    PS tomato has been sourced.
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 18, 2008

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 18, 2008

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