Donut Poem by Lamar Cole

Donut



When she said that he was like a donut.
He thought that she felt that he was sweet.
And that he had a nice smell.
But she really meant that he had a hole in the head.
And that his rap was so stale.
And he was just a big nasty rat.
That she would like to throw out and feed to the cat.

Friday, September 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2018

It is a lovely poem based on dual meaning and fun. All lines are haunting. Beautifully crafted.10

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Rini Shibu 14 September 2018

She really meant that he had a holein the head..funny

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