Down Behind The Dustbin - A Boy's Poem (Written When I Was 11)

Rating: 3.3
Down behind the dustbin,
I met a dog called Lizzie.
I asked what she was doing,
'**** off, I'm far too busy.'

Down behind the dustbin,
I met a dog called Tom.
I said, 'What are you making there? '
He said, 'It's my new bomb.'

Down behind the dustbin,
I met a wolf called Jack.
I asked who he was phoning,
He said, 'It's just the pack.'

Down behind the dustbin,
I met a dog called Matt.
I asked what he was eating,
He said, 'It's just the cat.'
Wednesday, August 26, 2009
Sonya Florentino 07 November 2009
eleven and already being clever!
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Ruth Walters 03 November 2009
great little rhyme and flow....loved it! Ruthie
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 27 October 2009
Your brilliance was announced when and before' this composition. Congratulations. You are gifted.
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Patti Masterman 25 October 2009
I really enjoyed this. Glad you saved it. A dog actually ate most of my childhood poems, just before he got himself run over. (smile)
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Jack Miller 22 October 2009
Here's the title of yours I liked best. What a promising poem for someone 11. Thanks for your comment. I just now joined this site. Your other poems are stirring. My fave poets are W S Merwin, Yeats, Keats (of course) , and Frank O'Hara to give you 4. Nice bio too- I need to work on that.
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Scuba Steve 26 August 2009
This is some good stuff. I liked it. Thanks for posting
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