Drainage (6-22-04) Poem by Kayla Jarnac

Drainage (6-22-04)

Rating: 2.3


In these lungs, once filled
with water,
Empty now, the air
depressed.
Saved myself, with a cough
and sputter,
Got it out of my
heaving chest.
The air I breathed was thin
and cold,
Soon it grew, thick
and warm.
Out it came, the plug I
pulled,
In, the life came, a rushing
swarm.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jodi Right 05 April 2005

Thats great! It has a great reference to CPR even if you weren't trying to give that image! I love how u dig deep and picture it inside out it is most interesting to read Love Jodixxxx

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