Kayla Jarnac

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Summer Nights (2-3-05)

Poem by Kayla Jarnac

Summer nights,
the warm, thick air,
a little humid, but not
too much,
Darkness stretching out,
but I can still see
the leaves, wafting in.
The faint cool breeze
Dries the tear in my eye
as I stretch my arms
and smile
Cools my skin, and the grass
waves goodbye
and its warm again.

Comments about Summer Nights (2-3-05) by Kayla Jarnac

  • Peter A. Crowther (5/5/2005 1:07:00 PM)

    I agree with Jodi but you need a full stop (period?) after 'in'(Report)Reply

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  • Kayla Jarnac (4/13/2005 8:51:00 AM)

    well...summer nites are my most favorite time ever...so relaxing...(Report)Reply

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  • Jodi Right (4/5/2005 10:27:00 AM)

    Thats lovely! i like the feel of it. Your a great descriptive poet and i can just feel the warm breeze pushing through my hair. Weather is a constant topic used in poetry and often appears dull but you have really expressed it in a way that the image is outstanding

    Love Jodixxx(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 5, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, May 9, 2005