Haiku (4-5-05)

Clouds move through the skies,
Changing their shapes all the time,
Pictures up so high.

Deer sprints to the road,
Then she waits for her children,
They cross together.

Turtle swimming slow,
Sliding through the ocean foam,
Four feet paddling.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 30 April 2014

Such a sweet collection! Nicely written!

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Peter A. Crowther 29 April 2005

These are very good; I like them, you have really got the feel of a haiku.

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Kayla Jarnac 13 April 2005

wel they werent originally the same poem but i posted them together cuz they kind of have the same subject...(nature ;)

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Jodi Right 05 April 2005

Great haikus only recently i have conquered how to do them! They are great and show powerful meaning in little words! brilliant! Love Jodixxxx P.S: People had a go at me that they thought all of them were as one singular poem maybe you wanna clarify that they aren't

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