Rating: 5.0
In this place of heavy stars and
Swollen moon hanging high above,
Like a bird through the sky, you are thrust
Deep into my head, and become everything.

My thoughts surround me,
I have created this world
In which I have watched you,
Both so desperately seeking, touch me.

Your radiant moon casts shadows over my face
And the breath of your words fill my ear
Every whispered memory,
Consumes every awakened moment.

Clawing my way closer to you,
I wish never to depart,
But in this moment of waking eyes, I will smile,
For you my dear, are more than just a dream.
Friday, October 13, 2006
Tailor Bell 29 October 2006
deep desire pours through your verse with hints of obsession. strong work. -Tailor
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Melvina Germain 29 October 2006
This poem is not only beautiful, but shows a great deal of passion. It truly touches my heart, I love it. A fabulous read, very well done Lipstick.--Melvina--
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Preeti - is here! 27 October 2006
Every whispered memory, Consumes every awakened moment ^^ Love those lines. This one's a passionate piece, i like it more because its subtle, soft and not in-your-face. Good work! : D Preets
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Original Unknown Girl 13 October 2006
How very beautiful - I love the imagery here and the passion oozes out of this piece. Well Done....... HG x
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